two obvious mistake made
in the fic, one by rei and the other by me -
by rei -> in a previous
part, sakura wasn't holding tetsu's hand, but stood far away and was quite
forgotten.
by me -> pook wrote in part
22 that hyde fell unconscious, but I made a boo-boo and made hyde cry into
tetsu's neck in part 23.
now on to explanation.
syoukai (detailed explanation)
*cough* uhm.. an explanation
of the outline plot which we've discussed before, now with more fillings
from parts 1-23.
start: hyde's and tetsu's
past->
hyde and tetsu used to be
lovers, until the village found out. They didn't take BL well in those
days, so while tetsu was locked up and cursed to become a Star in his next
life, hyde was sacrificed to the sea.
Explanation on Star->
Stars only fulfil a believer's
wish. BEcause sakura is not a believer, it can't be sakura. And stars obviously
have some special power. Tetsu's power is to be in sync with hyde's feelings.
Perhaps he has other hidden powers as well; Levin says that he can feel
that tetsu is strong.
Anyway, Stars will die after
they have completed their destiny, which is fulfilling the believer's wish...
(which explains the born-to-die part.)
Explanation on Hyde's
curse and the Sea->
because hyde was sacrificed
to the sea, the sea was a meanie and decided to make hyde die again and
again. that's why, in all of hyde's previous lives, he drowned. This time,
tetsu has reincarnated as a Star, and hyde unknowingly called tetsu by
accident....
characters' explanation->
hyde: a human sacrificed
to the sea a few lives ago and is now trying to escape his fate.
tetsu: a Star who was once
hyde's lover.
sakura: a piece of Darkness.
There is no specific purpose in his role except to confuse the reader(desyou?).
levin: Yukki's _real_ cousin.
As in, he's of the same race that Yukki is.
die: an innocent human who
owns the house. Controlled by the supernatural beings' power.
yukki: *cough* Son of the
Sea. He's the ultimate mastermind and _must_ be destroyed(or not...:P Maybe
he can be sedated by sakusakuchan)
explanation on character's
powers->
lined in order of power...
(1)yukihiro(son of sea)->
because of his royal blood...
(2)levin(cousin of royal
blood of sea)-> hasn't displayed much yet.
(2?)sakura(darkness)-> strong.
But because he's only a piece of darkness, he isn't as wise as Yukki is.
(?)tetsu(star)-> unknown.
He prolly has hidden powers not shown in parts 1-23 yet. Lebin says he's
strong.
(-)Die and hyde(humans)->
humans have no power.
And so... outline plot!
dunno what's gunna turn
out... See Summary for so far...^^;
but obviously, tetsu is
going to save hyde from the destiny, or else we have nothing to write about
:P.. ..
And remember, we only reveal
the characters' purposes at the end(except for tetsu and hyde's, because
it's sooo obvious already^^;)! It'll make it more fun!
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